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Post by Raptor on Nov 28, 2010 22:57:02 GMT -5
Oh, well this makes me feel dumb. In reference to the FASERIP stats sorry about that glaring mistake I made when getting it on here, had it written up already once, so I'll be fixing that. I'll be changing the history a little to make it so that it's a pretty similar story but without the X-men directly involved. The whole sharing a beer with Logan was pretty stupid too, reading it now. Logan will probably be involved but he would still have no idea who the kid is and definitely couldn't be counted as a contact. Also there are some minor power issues I have to do with this. I rushed it to keep myself from turning back but I'm committed to this character now that it's here on paper I'm good. I'll get the stats up first and try to have the rest finished by tomorrow.
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Post by Raptor on Nov 29, 2010 11:48:09 GMT -5
Alright, I've amended his history, made some minor tweaks to powers, and rewrote personality (personality is being kept vague on purpose, I find it's best to stick with one or two main traits and let the character's personality grow on it's own from there).
Let me know if there's anything else that needs to be taken care of. Also you noticed my note on his Resistance ability right?
EDIT:I've made some skill changes. The skill changes reflect the changes to history I've made.
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Post by Dead Sidekick on Nov 29, 2010 23:11:08 GMT -5
The character looks good, but I'd rather him not have any connection or history with the Xavier school or with the X-Men / Wolverine. This is mostly a timeline gripe, as the X-Men didn't really expand into a openly enrolling training school for mutants until after the "New Mutants" lineup came along, which is basically "right now" in game terms.
The connection to a former Stark Industries technician is cool. We've got two former Stark contractors on the team already.
One a side note, Raptor is remarkably similar to one of my old, old characters named "Alpha Scout" who was sort of a cross between Robin and Daredevil. An agility monkey with gadgets.
Can we wipe out the history as a student of Xavier's? Most mutants in the world never get that far, and develop their stuff on their own as best they can.
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Post by Raptor on Nov 30, 2010 11:19:08 GMT -5
No.
Just kidding, I altered and expanded the history.
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Post by TasK on Nov 30, 2010 11:40:07 GMT -5
I like this version a whole lot better, DSk. I was abit concerned with the timelines suggested, but the latest edit seems to have cleaned these up.I'm sure there will be X-Menesque moments in the future as our campaign moves forward in Judge Dead Sidekick's timeline. Maybe we'll even get someone Judging an X-type campaign here one day. Interesting character, Goblinoid. Hopefully we'll see you soon in the campaign! 
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Post by Raptor on Nov 30, 2010 12:19:46 GMT -5
Btw is there anyway you guys could change my user name to Raptor?
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Post by Vendetta on Nov 30, 2010 14:08:15 GMT -5
i think you can do that yourself - on your profile page
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Post by Raptor on Nov 30, 2010 14:47:59 GMT -5
So I can ty.
I'm not sure what way my character will go as he develops character and power, we'll see I guess.
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Post by Dead Sidekick on Dec 1, 2010 17:55:11 GMT -5
That looks better, Raptor. I like it alot, and there's at least 3 angles I can see to bring Raptor in to the game soon. Keep watching  |
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Post by Raptor on Dec 2, 2010 6:51:21 GMT -5
Cool, ty |
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Post by Dead Sidekick on Dec 2, 2010 12:12:06 GMT -5
Do you wanna start Raptor in the middle of a gang fight?  |
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Post by Vendetta on Dec 2, 2010 12:32:07 GMT -5
please do ... Vendetta needs to blow off some steam  |
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Post by Dead Sidekick on Dec 2, 2010 12:42:56 GMT -5
muhahahaha
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Post by Raptor on Dec 2, 2010 13:35:37 GMT -5
That's fine with me, where would I be posting and what do I need to know?
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Post by Dead Sidekick on Dec 2, 2010 13:57:50 GMT -5
I'll start a new sub-chapter thread for Raptor's intro soon. I hope to have the team all on one page and working together by Chapter 10.
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